Re: Mision 2: The Discovery

by me naam is m 2009-04-16, 17:26

The screen behind jack's back flickered it's final warning: 'STARGATE EJECTION IN PROGRESS' Then it faded. The station trembled twice. Two large halos made of naquadah flew out of the station towards the moon.
"The name's jack. Jack Steiner. What was your name? we never got to that part because some zooming insects were being louder than us."

by Insane Crayon 2009-04-16, 17:34

"I'm Analise.. Analise Sharp.. Do we need to leave??" Analise glanced once more at the thing on the wall and went over and grabbed it...

by FlashFreak22 2009-04-16, 17:48

John was running toward the ship. "You! Person... thing... guy... gal... Jack! That's it. Get Analise back to your ship. I'm trusting you now, but it's only benefit of the doubt. Try anything funny..." John winked. It was more of a "Let's see what your insides look like" wink than a nudge nudge wink wink. "I'll be right behind you. I'm going to try and salvage some things I found in a room. The doors are locked but hopefully I know how to hack things from watching Star Trek. Randomly typing keys after you've plugged a computer in should work." John ran back to a door in the corridor he just left, and started disassembling the control panel. In the foggy glass he could dimly see a room full of spherical objects and boxes.

by me naam is m 2009-04-16, 17:48

"Oh, if i'm hearing your radio transmissions well enough, they're saying something about a time bomb... Oh don't worry, it still has some two minutes to go..."
"No Lieutenant, one and a half"
"Oh, sorry, one and a half minute. Well, I suppose we'll have to leave. Come on boys and girls."
Anne flew past Analise like bird and launched herself to the dropship. John stuck his head out of the lock.
"Eh Lieutenant, stop chitchattering and risking getting blown to smithereens and get 'ere!"
"yeah yeah, i'm coming..."

Steiner slowly somersaulted towards the airlock and grabbed the door.

by Insane Crayon 2009-04-16, 17:50

Analise backfliped into the dropship and stood next to Jack..
"What was a timebomb doing on the station?"
Analise looked around the ship, and started to roam till someone stopped her..
"Oh sorry... I get curious of new things.. but I'll stop."

by me naam is m 2009-04-16, 17:56

"Oh not much, besides destroying an important piece of evidence..."
Jack catapulted himself into the captain's chair. He disengaged the docking hooks and fired up the engines. he nudged the dropship away from the station.
"Oh, by the way, I think there's something you should know... Our timebombs are always set to explode at one point zero zero instead of zero..."

by FlashFreak22 2009-04-16, 18:00

John sighed as he leaned back against the wall. "Ma'am. The room I found? It had some interesting stuff in it. I retrieved about 25 claw shaped blue devices. Maybe a dozen rifle things, three giant watches that do... something, and two hundred small spherical things with a large red button on them and a timer. Looks like a cache of weapons from somewhere. I doubt we'll be able to use them until our scientists make sure they can be used.

by Insane Crayon 2009-04-16, 18:02

Analise was worried about her team.

"No time John. GET OUT OF THERE. The bombs are going to go off at 1:00 not 0:00.. Now get out of there!!"

by me naam is m 2009-04-16, 18:08

"Oh and John, if i were you i'd leave those weapons behind too unless you want to be cooked by gamma radiation... these things weren't behind a wall for nothing and we left them there for a reason."
Jack slammed the engines to full thrust.
"Time to get out of here."

by FlashFreak22 2009-04-16, 18:12

"Aww you got to be kidding me! What idiot makes a bomb that blows up before people say so! Holly Wood's gonna be pissed."
John picked up the surprisingly light duffel bags and rushed toward the nearest exit. Checking to make sure that the suit was airtight, he shot the control panel of the airlock. He was sucked out to the blackness of space and kicked off the hull toward the faint orange glows of the ship's engine drive. A huge shockwave hit his back and he went tumbling toward the ships. On his HUD two rescue markers blinked. One hadn't made it out in time. He activated his and waited for the ships to turn around to pick up the stranded humans.

"Sorry to disappoint you Jack, but I brought them. Being cooked by Gamma radiation is a lot more fun by being eaten defenseless by a giant fish. The weapons seem to be unique to this particular station on this particular world, so I bet they work under water. I just hope that the ATA gene isn't required, or half the strike force gets to use crappy human 50 cals."

by me naam is m 2009-04-16, 18:43

FlashFreak22 wrote:Checking to make sure that the suit was airtight, he shot the control panel of the airlock. He was sucked out to the blackness of space and kicked off the hull toward the faint orange glows of the ship's engine drive.

(Where did you get that air pressure? surely not from the station since it didn't have any air to start with.)

me naam is m wrote:"Okay guys and gal, Keep your suits on, I'm not going to pressurize the vessel because the station isn't pressurized either"

FlashFreak22 wrote:A huge shockwave hit his back and he went tumbling toward the ships. On his HUD two rescue markers blinked. One hadn't made it out in time. He activated his and waited for the ships to turn around to pick up the stranded humans.

(A shockwave in space? you have to be kidding me...)

"Well John, the idiot did that also made it impossible to defuse it in time for others, making it a lot more effective."

Inge took cover behind a rock when the shrapnel started to make little caters in the moon dust. Nicholson sat beside her with his back against the rock while Wilde sat behind a ledge from an old impact crater together with the equipment. She wondered where the stargates went.

Suddenly a huge trembling made her know. One of the gates slammed into the rock she was sitting behind, breaking it in two and sending debris everywhere. The stargate then slowly toppled over towards Inge and Nicholson. It trapped them both in the inside of the ring, nearly missed Nicholson but it fell right on Inge's arm.
"Ah SH!!!"

After the dust and debris had finally settled they could see again. Wilde ran to them immediately and Nicholson slowly got up as if he had been stunned by a zat.
"van Kant! Are you okay?"
"As you can see by the position of my arm under that freaking gate and the angle it is making I'd say not, you idiot!"
"How does your arm feel?"
"It HURTS! of course! it's snapped! it feels like they just hacked it off!"
"Well, good, at least you feel something, that means it's not severed or splintered and there's no decompression either. Hold steady..."
Nicholson and Wilde slowly tilted the stargate so that there was a centimeter of space between her arm and the gate. Wilde quickly pulled her arm back and the stargate tilted back again.
"AARGH! You jerk!"
"SHUT UP! Or do you want to keep lying there?

by FlashFreak22 2009-04-16, 19:32

(Please remain seated until the rant comes at a full and complete stop. I really don't care about the "Shockwave in space." Why do you care so much? It's not physics it's an RPG in a fictional universe. About the air pressure, do you really have to care that much? Do you think it's ubering to use non-existent air pressure to propel my character away from a station or do you have a life-long mission to use details to kill my character? Do you really think it's important to point those out every single time? The important point is that he is floating in space and he is alive, not that he felt a non existent shockwave. OK, rant over.)
John reactivated the emergency signal on his tracking device. For the sixth time.
"Uhh sir? Could you send a jumper on a course to the left edge of the explosion radius? I'm kinda stranded here."

After five minutes of floating he was back on the ship. "OK, so assuming we aren't going to run into any more problems, when are we going to deploy?"

by me naam is m 2009-04-16, 19:36

(oh sorry... sometimes i tend to focus too much on story continuity... that tends to happen when you're also in some of the most demanding groups like me)

by FlashFreak22 2009-04-16, 19:38

(And I'm in a group that's arrogant to the point of killing when you point out my flaws. Razz

sorry as well.)

by me naam is m 2009-04-16, 19:42

FlashFreak22 wrote:(And I'm in a group that's arrogant to the point of killing when you point out my flaws. sorry as well.)

(There's a difference between feedback and killing. Don't worry, my feedback always is harsh. Even on myself. I'm such a perfectionist.)

by Gnatsirt269 2009-04-16, 19:52

Gnatsirt269 wrote:Ben woke up in a large field. The sun shone on his face. Something told him to go to the Stargate.
WAIT! he thought, Didn't I DIE?!
The question reeled in his head. But something wouldn't let him ponder. Something kept saying
Go to the Stargateand dial Earth
Ben got up and started searching, for the Stargate.

Ben had stumbled into a small settlement, and learned where the, "Star Ring" was.
As he walked, he started to notice a change, in his thoughts. The voice was getting louder, and his thoughts dimmer. Suddenly the voice started shouting in his head. He clasped his ears, and fell to the ground. Tears streamed down his face.
"Leave me ALONE!!" he shouted.
He laid there a moment. Then arose. Ben tried to walk. But he couldn't. Something else was controling him. Then Ben realized the horrible truth. His mind was no longer his own!

by Gnatsirt269 2009-04-16, 20:11

Suddenly Ben was in a dark room.
This must be my mind
A voice said "Yes, this is."
You the one who took over my mind
"As a matter of fact, yes. I am an implanted Conscience. I am in complete control of you body. And by the way, don't try to fight back. It would kill your body, and I need that for my secrect mission"
And what is you secret mission
"If I told you, it wouldn't be a secrect would it!"
Laughter filled the "room".
(I'm going to call the other Conscience "Neb".)

by **JPB18** 2009-04-17, 12:41

"Ok... Thrusters went offline with the (so called) shockwave" Said I... "We will get stuck here also for a good time... I wished we had Mckay here..." Me gets up and goes to the cargo area and try to help the repairs off the thrusters...

by Insane Crayon 2009-04-17, 13:04

Analise as stunned as o what she saw. This ship was a little more advanced the what they had back at base. She didn't know what to think of it. She continued to roam around the ship, under guard, and looked at various technolgies.
Guard 1: Come with us. We'll show you were you'll be staying.
Guard 2: *snickers* The captain will love this. Two slaves. The lucky..
Guard 1: Shut your mouth.. Remember the last person that crossed him? Was sent out the airlock.. Though your right.. and this one looks like a fighter.
Analie was getting highly anoyed at these two as she was led to a nicely furnished room. She checked her belt and boot to make sure her Zat and combat knife where still there. Her P-90 was taken from her when she enered the ship. When Jack gets here, he has some questions to answer. She found a pad of paper and a pencil and began to draw.

by FlashFreak22 2009-04-17, 13:20

(Just pretend there was an EMP.)
John walked down to the firing range with the satchels of Ancient weapons. He pulled out one of the spheres and looked at it. Maybe he would try it out in a less enclosed area... He picked up the claw shaped thing and peered at it. There was a meter on it as well as a firing stud. It was some sort of pistol. He fired it at the targets and melted a small hole through the center. The meter twitched. He fired a dozen more times and the meter went slightly up and settled back down. An over-heatable energy weapon, then. Not all that effective, but automatic. It was good that he shared the joint command of logistics for weapons, than. He picked up the rifle looking thing and pulled a trigger. A thing blue beam emanated from the rifle and drilled a hole into the target. A sniper rifle. He picked up one of the wrist guards and activated it. A blue-green light came from the center and spread in front of him. A personal energy shield. He touched another button and it spread in a bubble around him. He breathed in and out a few times, and discovered that it produced air. There were a very limited amount of the weapons and other things, only 5 wrist guards. One for him, Jack, Analise, the colonel, and the uber machine. John took a pistol and fired multiple times into the fifth arm guard. So much for the uber machine. Only the four of them would be going down, but if Jack was going to whine about radiation so be it. Oh well. Weapons discharge couldn't be nearly as harmful enough to give anyone cancer. He hoped. He picked up the satchels and started lugging them back to Lt. Colonel Analise. The giggler.

"Ma'am? I've been testing some of the gear, and they're all perfect for underwater combat. There are only five... err... four shields, so only us can go. The rest will have to follow in their slower gear. Well, assuming we don't run into any more tiny problems like time bombs or old friends or Barney, when are we going to deploy?"

by **JPB18** 2009-04-17, 13:23

(Terra was made prisioner)

A lot of sparks exited from the computer of the Jumper... The HUD lighted up the now repaired thrusters...
"Guys, the jumper is back on action... where are you so we can get you?"

by FlashFreak22 2009-04-17, 13:32

(She isn't really prisoner, but if she is I just knocked on her door and said something.)

by me naam is m 2009-04-17, 13:38

(You're not even near her. say... other side of moon to be exact. and no, you could NOT have been in our drop'ship', because it's only able to carry 4 including the captain, one had to sit on the ground already.)

(okay, i'm also trying to prevent having ships here as well outside transport, this is a stargate RPG, not a trek RPG.)

Jack jumped out of the airlock onto the moon surface. They'd found a stranded ship like the space station at the surface on the moon. This one wasn't nearly as neglected as the moon base, the ship had power, was pressurized and didn't emit any radiation like the station did, everything worked perfectly except the engines. It seemed like it had been cannibalized to repair another ship. He had left Depardieu and John at the ship guarding Analise and left again to pick up Nicholson, Wilde and van Kant. He activated the dropship's engines again and race over the moon surface for a minute until he saw them through the window instead of on the head up display as markers.

He exited the door and walked towards them.
"Is she okay?"
"Apart from some broken bones, she's okay. The suit didn't tear and the gate didn't completely squish her arm."
"Good. Inge, can you walk?"
"Yeah, i can. My arm hurts like hell though."
"Naturally. Come on, let's get into the dropship. we've found something interesting."
"What!? Aren't you going to bring me back home?"
"Not yet. The gate back home isn't open yet. Besides, we'll see what we can do about it here first."
"While in a space suit?"
"Now this is where the fun part starts."

He gently lifted off and flew back to the ship.
"Okay, unfrtunately due to the ship's position and tilt i can't dock it directly, i'll have to land, we'll climb into the airlock."
"But, i can't climb with only one arm!"
"You don't need to, i'm gonna carry you."
"What?"
"You're forgetting the low gravity."

by FlashFreak22 2009-04-17, 13:42

(I thought you were on a slightly bigger ship that could travel through hyperspace... I'll just have said that to mista Colonel played by JPB then.)

by **JPB18** 2009-04-17, 13:51

We catched John and head for the Ship to try to rescue Terra
"Ok... Drones armed... We will have visual in 3, 2, 1..." Said I... There were what seemed one, no... two guys climbing the Starship... The Jumper passed by the ship and made a turn... "Ok... Shoot!" Three drones where fired hitting the ship in several spots slightly away from them... (Me naam continue from here...)

by me naam is m 2009-04-17, 14:13

FlashFreak22 wrote:(I thought you were on a slightly bigger ship that could travel through hyperspace... I'll just have said that to mista Colonel played by JPB then.)

me naam is m wrote:He flew the Dropship through the gate alone and waited for the rest to come. He activated his radio.

(well, whatever... gonna post more. i interrupted my writing for that)

Steiner put van Kant down again and waited for the others to get inside. He activated the pressurization mechanism. After some moments the door opened and they walked into the hall. Jack put his helmet off.
"Ahh... fresh air..."
Suddenly the whole ship trembled.
"WHAT THE... !!! Nicholson, get Inge to the sickbay if there's any on this ship, and try to get her suit off without inflicting any more damage! The rest to the bridge!"
Jack sprinted off towards the front of the ship.

by Insane Crayon 2009-04-17, 14:17

Analise looked around. What was the team doing!? They could kill her as well as them, and currently she was in no danger. She needed to get a message to her team, but didn't know how..

by **JPB18** 2009-04-17, 14:19

The Jumper gets clear from the ship...
"John... pick a few and I will drop you right in front their dropship... you know what to do... rescue her..." Said I "Ready! Jump!"
The door openned and the shield of the cackpit raised... John and two more jumped... They landed right in front of the landed drop ship...
"John, how was the landing?" Asked I

by Insane Crayon 2009-04-17, 14:33

(I'm staying on the ship <.< no matter what you do)

by FlashFreak22 2009-04-17, 14:44

"Pretty good sir. We're coming around... There! We have a visual on their thrusters. I wonder what these little things can do inside the vital systems of a ship."

John opened a hailing frequency to the ship.

"Hello? Who is this?"

"My commanding officer is politely requesting that you release one of our officers. We'll trade for her."

*snort*
"Trade? You have nothing of value we would want."

"Oh well, it'll be fun to blow your engines beyond repair and leave you here to freeze and suffocate."

There was a silence and John sighed. Looks like they called his bluff. He took one of the rifles and fired several times into the drive core. They weren't going to be going anywhere anytime soon, but they could easily repair it. What he didn't get was why the colonel even wanted him to go after Analise. It's not like she was in any danger, and Jack should be reasonably civilized to not hurt an unarmed prisoner/guest/saboteur.

by me naam is m 2009-04-17, 14:46

JPB18 wrote:John and two more jumped... They landed right in front of the landed drop ship...

(not in drop'ship'. in some stranded ancient cruiser.)

(dropship is to the stranded ship as a russian HIND helicopter to a battlecruiser.)

by FlashFreak22 2009-04-17, 14:49

(I followed what Terra wanted. She's on the ship, but with no engines. Next we move to the sensor array. Then the navigation. Then weapons. Then the life support. Then the money! JK...)

by **JPB18** 2009-04-17, 15:44

I made the Jumper hover right behind it's engines...

"So, what's gonna be?" Asked I... Suddenly, the ship just disappeared on a very bright flash...

"John, are you and your team ok?" Asked I

by me naam is m 2009-04-18, 08:50

Depardieu was already on the bridge when Steiner darted in.
"You suppose this ship does have some scanners, Depardieu?"
"I dunno man, i'm not the ancients expert around here, but take a look at that."
Depardieu pointed at a screen on the right. The ship they'd seen the others come in was hovering outside with weapons aimed at them.

"Were's Anne when you need her?"
"Here I am!"
She walked in through the other door and looked at the viewscreen.
"Could you try to make out how much damage this thing has sustained from these panels?"
"Yes sir."

He activated his radio headset.
"John, get Analise here with you."
"Yes sir."

Inge looked at her arm. Nicholson had finally managed to get the armpiece of her suit off without hurting her too much, and it looked even much stranger than it looked with the armpiece still on.
"Awww man.... that'll put me out of duty for a long time... The lieutenant won't be happy."
"I don't blame you. I've seen people pull some pretty weird stuff just to avoid their duties, but I'm sure this was not on purpose. Steiner will understand."

by Gnatsirt269 2009-04-18, 14:03

Gnatsirt269 wrote:Suddenly Ben was in a dark room.
This must be my mind
A voice said "Yes, this is."
You the one who took over my mind
"As a matter of fact, yes. I am an implanted Conscience. I am in complete control of you body. And by the way, don't try to fight back. It would kill your body, and I need that for my secrect mission"
And what is you secret mission
"If I told you, it wouldn't be a secrect would it!"
Laughter filled the "room".
(I'm going to call the other Conscience "Neb".)

Neb made it to the Stargate. He was about to dial the SGC, then thought against it. They would recgonize him there. He dialed Atlantis. He knew his mission. Gather all info on Earth Military, all information about the SGC, and the locations of the Alpha Site. He would also help get Genii to the Milky Way. That was the hardest part. He would have to Hijack a Ship.

by **JPB18** 2009-04-18, 19:51

We landed the jumper next to the place where before was an ancient warship... Me and Another guy went searching for John's team...
"Do you see anything?" Asked I
"No sir... Wait! I saw them..." Said him
We brought them back to the Jumper, after that, we returned to Earth... without Analise...

by Earthdeath 2009-04-18, 22:21

Psycho was waiting when the jumper arrived.
"Where the hell is Analise Cannon?She was meant to be with you!"

by **JPB18** 2009-04-19, 07:51

"She was capturated and taken to an ancient battleship by someone named Jack..." Said I "Then, when we went to rescue her, the battleship just disappeared..."

by me naam is m 2009-04-19, 08:13

Jack blinked his eyes again.
"What... the hell just happened?"
"That other ship... it just disappeared!"
"And so has our dropship. GREAT. That's just so EFFING great!"
"What, are you serious?"
"Do i look like i am joking?!"

Steiner looked at the front screen, thinking.
"Hmm. Let's see what else has just disappeared. I'm going to look outside, the rest stays here."

He put his helmet back on and walked to one of the airlocks. After it finished depressurizing and the door opened he jumped out and landed on the moon's surface. He looked out into space and at the planet.
"What the... I thought we just blew that freaking thing up?"

by **JPB18** 2009-04-19, 08:26

After a small reunion...

"Sir, we need to send a rescue mission!" Said I...
"And we will..." Said Psyco "But we don't have a clue about her location, so we're gonna send a ship to the planet... And I want you and your team to go along..."

by Meganew Trek 2009-04-20, 14:58

Julius woke up, and realized what happened. He then kneeled down and prayed.

"Oh Lord, please help me to get back to normal. Please don't let me die." He then stood up, and realized all his wounds were healed. "Yee-haw!" he yelled. "I'm alive! And.. I don't know where I am."

by Insane Crayon 2009-04-21, 13:07

A random soldier walks over to Julius and shoots him.
"He is FUBAR now."

(there.. another dead person)

by **JPB18** 2009-04-21, 13:14

(lol)

The Hammond exited hyperspace above the planet...
"Scan the planet..." Said Carter...
"Aye, sir..."
Cannon appears and ask to Carter...
"So, what are we searching for?"
"Any possible ancient base..." Said Carter...
"Scan completed..." Said the officer... "There's a massive building under the surface..."
"Ok..." Said Carter... "SG-1, get ready to use the rings... I'm going with you..."

by me naam is m 2009-04-21, 13:42

about READING the F*cking topic. you do realize i need to kill you now for such insolence?

by **JPB18** 2009-04-21, 14:05

Did karlo said anything? I don't think so Razz

by Insane Crayon 2009-04-21, 14:06

Analise sits on the bed she was given and continues to draw. She had been treated respectfully, but not without some disrespect from some of the more vulgar soldiers. She wandered when she would get to go home, or some fresh air.. She put down the paper and started to pace the room.

by **JPB18** 2009-04-21, 14:09

The team rematerialized inside a massive ancient base... after a few steps, the lights went up... it was not just a simple outpost... it was a huge shipyard... with a ship so big inside that almost reached the size of an Hive Ship... The team entered in the ship and Cannon sat on the captain chair, which activated... a lot of screen immediatly went up and an huge information appeared...

by me naam is m 2009-04-21, 14:26

Steiner looked outside again and saw some lights approaching.
"Weird.."
He looked out on the other side and cursed.
"Great. perfect. FREAKING PERFECT!"

"What?"

"I'm not sure the Ancients would like it if we'd suddenly turned up in one of their ships, a disabled one for that, out of totally nowhere and land at the moon circling their milkyway stronghold. especially armed. Get eeryone on their feet, our guest too."

by Gnatsirt269 2009-04-21, 15:03

(FYI, I'll be able to play more during Wednesday, Thursday, Friday and sometimes Saturday. That is because that is when my public library is open. I can't go on much, because my mom is suspicious of computers. But on those days, I am unrestrained at the library to go n the computer. Just thought I'd tell you)

by **JPB18** 2009-04-21, 15:06

An huge scientists team arrove from Earth...
"So, what do we have..." Asked me "Psico"...
"It seems we've an interdimensional travelling ship on hands... and it also has a powerfull intergalactic drive of unknown type... Rest is equal to any other ancient ship... weapons, hull and an enormously powerfull shield..."
"So, we've a supperweapon in hand..." Said "Psyco"
"Yes, plus, we can carry several DSC's inside his fighter bays... although they're now empty..." Said I
"A carrier?" Asked "Psyco"
"Yes, maybe..." Said I...

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