Re: Mision 2: The Discovery

by FlashFreak22 2009-04-21, 19:16

John walked over to a white panel on a wall. It looked like a computer terminal. Inside was another advanced starmap, one thats last coordinates were set on the water planet. Another piece that wouldn't fit in the puzzle.

by **JPB18** 2009-04-22, 13:29

"Sir, we've discovered the weapons room..." Said I "I can't power up this chair... This ship has no weapons capable of acting the conventional way..."
"So, we need to bring the ship for repairs?" Asked the Gen.
"I think so... although we can fly it... We will try to take off in one hour from now..." Said I
"Ok... SGC Out" Said the general...

by Karlo 2009-04-22, 14:00

(ye, delete the post will you?)

(pls. forgive me for not following some things, since i don't get it currently)

"suddenly, enemy scouts discover the derelict ship and the general is forced to either leave the ship or defend it,

he says "we have to defend this, though we can't survive for long, we have to defend it till we can arm ourselves with as much as possible before ejecting into the pod."

by **JPB18** 2009-04-22, 14:03

Karlo wrote:(ye, delete the post will you?)

(pls. forgive me for not following some things, since i don't get it currently)

"suddenly, enemy scouts discover the derelict ship and the general is forced to either leave the ship or defend it,

he says "we have to defend this, though we can't survive for long, we have to defend it till we can arm ourselves with as much as possible before ejecting into the pod."

PS: The general is ED! EARTHDEATH! not you, not some random general... I just used him to say "ok, we see..." and little more.... And the ship is so low on the surface of the planet that they could only access it through rings! And there's a Deadulus Class BC on orbit!

by Insane Crayon 2009-04-22, 15:36

Analise looked at the two guards grinnig.
Guard 1: Heh heh. The boss wants to see you. Hope you don't give him any trouble. Should we put her in the traditonal slave uniform?
Guard 2: no no no. The boss would kill us. He likes women in uniform remember?
Both Guards laugh as they escort Analise to Jack. Analise struggled against the plexicuffs on her wrists. The guards had no respect for women.. They had put the cuffs on too tight and it was hurting her wrists. She looked up to see Jack looking at the guards like he was going to kill them.

by me naam is m 2009-04-22, 16:49

Karlo wrote:(ye, delete the post will you?)

(pls. forgive me for not following some things, since i don't get it currently)

"suddenly, enemy scouts discover the derelict ship and the general is forced to either leave the ship or defend it,

he says "we have to defend this, though we can't survive for long, we have to defend it till we can arm ourselves with as much as possible before ejecting into the pod."

(you have no experience with RPGs whatsoever, do you?)

"Guys, now is not a time for pranks. Get those cuffs of and wipe that stupid grin of your face or i'll do it for you."
"Now, Analise, I gathered that you guys regard the ancients highly and are their allies. We are not. in fact, we've been at war with them. currently there's an armed piece with them, but there's nothing signed, so we might be on the brink of causing an intergalactic war."

by **JPB18** 2009-04-22, 17:02

"The long dead ancients build this warship before they disapeared..." Thought I "Dead what! We're their descendents! They aren't dead, they live inside us!" Suddenly, John interrupted his thinking line...
"Sir, we're ready..." Said He
"Ok..." Said I "Him heading to the bridge..."

by me naam is m 2009-04-22, 18:16

JPB18 wrote:"The long dead ancients build this warship before they disapeared..." Thought I "Dead what! We're their descendents! They aren't dead, they live inside us!"

(ehm... so you're putting this before SG: Atlantis? scratch

)

by FlashFreak22 2009-04-22, 18:18

As the group of people stopped at the bridge and beheld the technician crew starting up the systems, John paused. A small red light was blinking on an untouched panel. He moved over to it and looked. It was a sensor station. It was different though, as though it had been modified. It worked in conjunction with the subspace communicator, running the sensor probe through some sort of transformer and boosting the sensor's power be a hundred-fold. With it, the crew could see into other solar systems and across most of the galaxy.

by **JPB18** 2009-04-22, 18:37

me naam is m wrote:
JPB18 wrote:"The long dead ancients build this warship before they disapeared..." Thought I "Dead what! We're their descendents! They aren't dead, they live inside us!"
(ehm... so you're putting this before SG: Atlantis? )

No... They, in our plane no longuer exist, and they only ascended... so, to us, they have no influence... Besides, I already told the scene of the Wraith Have ship ZPM powered,so...

by Gnatsirt269 2009-04-22, 19:41

Gnatsirt269 wrote:
Gnatsirt269 wrote:Suddenly Ben was in a dark room.
This must be my mind
A voice said "Yes, this is."
You the one who took over my mind
"As a matter of fact, yes. I am an implanted Conscience. I am in complete control of you body. And by the way, don't try to fight back. It would kill your body, and I need that for my secrect mission"
And what is you secret mission
"If I told you, it wouldn't be a secrect would it!"
Laughter filled the "room".
(I'm going to call the other Conscience "Neb".)

Neb made it to the Stargate. He was about to dial the SGC, then thought against it. They would recgonize him there. He dialed Atlantis. He knew his mission. Gather all info on Earth Military, all information about the SGC, and the locations of the Alpha Site. He would also help get Genii to the Milky Way. That was the hardest part. He would have to Hijack a Ship.

Neb walked into the gate room of atlantis, where Mr. Wosely (Sorry don't know how to spell his name) walked up to him.
"Why the unexpected visit from the SGC?" he inquired.
"Vacation" was Nebs only, and final answer.
Mr. Wolsey nodded, "We DO have some extra room for visitors, so ou could stay in one of those."
"Yes."
Mr. Wolsey seemed unnerved. "May I ask..."
"Yes?" Neb raised an eyebrow.
"...What is your name?"
Now THAT is a problem Neb thought.
"Neb."
"O.K., Neb right this way." Mr. Wosely put out his arm in the gesture that meant you first.

In his quarters, Neb hacked into the main files and made a fake account there, in the name Neb. That way no one would question, and no one would die. Because then, he would have to clean up. An blood sure is hard to get off the floor...

by me naam is m 2009-04-23, 12:16

JPB18 wrote:
me naam is m wrote:
JPB18 wrote:"The long dead ancients build this warship before they disapeared..." Thought I "Dead what! We're their descendents! They aren't dead, they live inside us!"
(ehm... so you're putting this before SG: Atlantis? )

No... They, in our plane no longuer exist, and they only ascended... so, to us, they have no influence... Besides, I already told the scene of the Wraith Have ship ZPM powered,so...

(oh sorry, got confused by some contradictory info)

by Karlo 2009-04-23, 12:27

me naam is m wrote:
Karlo wrote:(ye, delete the post will you?)

(pls. forgive me for not following some things, since i don't get it currently)

"suddenly, enemy scouts discover the derelict ship and the general is forced to either leave the ship or defend it,

he says "we have to defend this, though we can't survive for long, we have to defend it till we can arm ourselves with as much as possible before ejecting into the pod."
(you have no experience with RPGs whatsoever, do you?)

"Guys, now is not a time for pranks. Get those cuffs of and wipe that stupid grin of your face or i'll do it for you."
"Now, Analise, I gathered that you guys regard the ancients highly and are their allies. We are not. in fact, we've been at war with them. currently there's an armed piece with them, but there's nothing signed, so we might be on the brink of causing an intergalactic war."

in this type, since i DID not get the full story, NO, but just in this case Razz

by **JPB18** 2009-04-23, 17:32

Cannon sits on the chair and thinks... "How should we get out off the hangar if this thing is thousand of meters under ground?" Suddenly, a large bubble appears in the Bridge, showing all sistems... and pointing to the unknown drive... Suddenly... Cannon's mind get full of information... and by a few seconds he gets unreactive to any calls... after that, he power up a lot of systems, the ships computers make billions of calculations in just 2 seconds and it just disappears with a small flash... The ship left the hangar...

by FlashFreak22 2009-04-24, 09:28

John mans the weapons and sensor station. He looks again at the boosted sensors. They were detecting two faint masses and a certain frequency coming from one of the masses. The frequency only used by SG team distress signals. "Sir! I'm detecting a distress signal at these coordinates."

Cannon frowns. "All the way out here? That can't be right..."

"I bet it's Analise though sir. We should go there."

by Insane Crayon 2009-04-24, 11:11

FlashFreak22 wrote:John mans the weapons and sensor station. He looks again at the boosted sensors. They were detecting two faint masses and a certain frequency coming from one of the masses. The frequency only used by SG team distress signals. "Sir! I'm detecting a distress signal at these coordinates."

Cannon frowns. "All the way out here? That can't be right..."

"I bet it's Analise though sir. We should go there."

.... STOP TRYING TO RESCUE ME!!! .... It's someone else until I WANT to be rescued..

by **JPB18** 2009-04-24, 12:33

"It isn't... besides, the large flash which made you pass out was an inter dimensional drive..." Said I "They're not in this dimension... Exiting in three, two, one..." The white sphere that surrounded the ship disappeared in another flash of light... They had arrived to Earth just 2 minutes after they left the planet... That really was the most advanced starship ever created...

by FlashFreak22 2009-04-24, 17:37

"Another dimension? So what dimension are we in now? It seem as though the sensors were specially modified to work through dimensions, and are powerful enough to boost their way through any interference. If we can duplicate this, we might be able to cut our way through Wraith jamming! We could beam our nukes on board like old times."

by **JPB18** 2009-04-25, 10:03

"We're in the right one... we were using the Long-range inter-galactic drives... the Inter-Dimensional drive is still fried and will need repairs..." Said I "BTW, where's an Asgard heal pod when someone needs it? I think I'm gonna to collapse with so much information!"

by Enish Lord 2009-04-27, 11:16

(hay, could I join)

by Insane Crayon 2009-04-27, 13:07

(Create a character, and I'll come up with someway to get you into the story.)

by **JPB18** 2009-04-28, 14:44

The ship was now being repaired, has it would be the only chance to rescue Analise... Cannon was resting on a asgard healing pod in Area 51, as knowledge was being downloaded from his mind... But Analise was still alone... stuck in other paralel universe...

(Now plese develop the story! MNIM, Terra!)

by me naam is m 2009-05-01, 07:21

JPB18 wrote:The ship was now being repaired, has it would be the only chance to rescue Analise... Cannon was resting on a asgard healing pod in Area 51, as knowledge was being downloaded from his mind... But Analise was still alone... stuck in other paralel universe...

(Now plese develop the story! MNIM, Terra!)

(remember i don't have quite the regular internet acces right now)
(geez, my hands sweat like hell now after using the mouse for just a few minutes right now.)

Jack looked out at the ship aproaching them. one aurora class he specifically remembered, because he had blown quite a large part of the hull to smithereens. that was also which had made him realize that they were back in their own universe, for the damage still hadn't repaired. it made him think. usually the ancients repaired damage to their ships much faster.

Suddenly a hail from the aurora opened.
"This is the Lantean Aurora class battleship Veyron. We know you're not ancients, but we don't know how you got here in one of out own ships. This ship even. You will be boarded for capture. do not resist and we will not need to take harmful actions. Your case will be addressed to later since at the moment we're rather occupied."

At that moment at the horizon of the planet something large exploded and fell into the atmosphere.

by Insane Crayon 2009-05-01, 13:21

Analise looked around the room. Where was she? She had been suffernig blackouts.. This was not normal.. She called out for someone, hoping they would hear her.

by me naam is m 2009-05-01, 13:55

Steiner heard Analise shouting in the adjacent room. They hadn't even put them in proper cells like they usually did, whatever was occupying them right now must be really important.

"Analise? Could you please be still for a moment? listen!"
He pressed his ear against the wall again. On the other side he could hear the guards talking.
"...don't get why they didn't shoot them to pieces anyway"
"Well, they did appear just like that in an experimental ship for hopping around in parallel dimensions. Without a transdimensional drive even, that had been removed from the ship after they abandoned the project. The even weirder thing is that they're from this dimension though. did you see that lieutenant Steiner? He is the one who damaged the Veyron!"
"Are you serious?"
"Yeah man - oh watch out, here comes the captain"

by **JPB18** 2009-05-01, 14:03

Cannon now exited from the healing pod, but was interned at the SGC infirmary... He still had to much info on it's mind... but they were vanishing... except some information relative to that ship... maybe how to control the drive, maybe how to build more, maybe how to repair it... he started having dreams related with what would come...

by FlashFreak22 2009-05-02, 16:17

It just kept getting better and better, or so the techies said. They had found all sorts of things that the ship could do, just by linking systems. They had drones with mini hyperdrives, a multidimensional drone that could split into multiple realities and return as multiple drones and even found a way to link the drive to the shields, causing anything to hit them be jettisoned into another reality. Besides that, it was completely boring work, guarding the scientists. "Corporal Aborr? We just made a new discovery," said a smallish man at Johns shoulder. He sighed and walked over to a cheering group of scientists. "What now? This better be good..." They chortled as if John was an idiot. "Well, to dumb it down enough for you, we have found an unlimited source of energy that is made by linking the drive to the sensory station and-"

"Cut to the chase doc."

"We've found a way to draw Zero Point Energy with our sensor-drive combination."

John sighed. So much for scientist = smart. "Well if the dimension drive combined with the sensory array lets you find the energy, how do you draw it from the area?"

A scientist froze in the middle of a lecture and furrowed his brows. "Well we could... Actually I..."

John smiled. "That's what I thought. Great. Now get back to work."

He sighed and turned back to the door. The scientist who told John about the discovery came back. "We do have a functional way of creating solid mass. We draw molecules from other dimensions, and it effectively creates a sort of force field around the ship." John turned to him. "Good job. Now get back to work. None of this matters until we get it into fighting shape." The scientist nodded and went over to a group of his fellows typing furiously on their data pads.

by **JPB18** 2009-05-02, 18:54

Cannon woke up... it was in a very dark infirmary... he kept walking to the door... after that... he wasn't anymore on the SGC... he was at a battlefield... there, he was able to see several Ancient battleships taking off while at the horizon, he was able to see dozens of nuclear explosions...
Suddenly, he saw several human soldiers beam around them... they didn't saw him and continue into what was the infirmary... but now it was a ancient outpost... he enters there... and he see's himself in the surface of the planet where they found the interdimentional ship... he then saw Analise in front of him
"Analise?" Said Cannon
"Mark... I'm still here..." Said her "Please... I need you to rescue me... I'm still here..."
"What, but we where there with a DSC... you werent there or anything similar..." Said Mark...
"I'm still here..." Said her... and it repeated until the scene become dark and Cannon awakes... Sweating, with a scared face...
"What the hell was that?" though Cannon... He then got up and walked into his quarters... in the same dark SGC, but without sudden changes of enviroment...

by me naam is m 2009-05-02, 20:15

The door opened and the Ancients captain appeared in the light opening. "Come." He beckoned. Jack walked out of the cell and a soldier put him in shackles. The captain walked over to the door of Analise's room and opened it. Again he only spoke one word: "Come." It was more of a statement than an order.

by Insane Crayon 2009-05-02, 20:56

Analise was dragged to another room, but before she got a glimpse of Jack.. She made no eye contact with him, but was put in another cell, this one more like a royal suite then a cell.. She walked around her room before a guard knocked on her cell door.
"Anything I can get you? We were told to give you anything you want.. apparently your some royal guest. But you can't leave your room." The guard told her.
"I would like some food and new clothes.. and a bath.."
Guard: There is a bathroom in that room. I will send someone in soon with food and clothes.
"Thank you."
She paced around her room. What was going on?? She knew she didn't know her mother.. but this was just odd.. a special treatment to a captive??

by me naam is m 2009-05-02, 21:52

Jack sat down. Hah... The advantages of being an officer and having a couple of grey hairs... It reminded him again of why he never dyes that last string of hair. Pity for the rest though. They probably had to share some spartan rooms.

The captain sat down on the chair opposite to him.
"How did you get here?"
"Well, somehow that ship did it. I'd tell you more if i knew."
"So this has nothing to do with another trick from the Wraith?"
"No, we have... - Wait, what, the Wraith?"
"You don't know about the wraith? You have to be kidding me... Are your people still living in blissful ignorance? Or... Rather... Are you feigning it? How do we know we can trust you? You're the one who made us fall back to this planet after all... You also blew a large part of my ship to hell."
"I don't know... But to tell you the truth, i don't care. You know I've always been pretty easygoing with that. In the end people always are forced to see the reality anyway."
"Hmmmpf. So who's that other officer that is with you? she's clearly higher in rank than you but she does listen to you."
"I don't know very well really. We've taken her captive just recently and all i know so far of her is her first name and that she knows more about those 'Wraith' than i do."
"Hmmm. We'll see."

The captain got up suddenly and walked out of the door towards Analise's new 'cell'.

by **JPB18** 2009-05-03, 08:09

Colonel Canon was brought to the battleship... John saw him...
"Colonel!" Said him... "Good to see that you're back..."
"Yeah, good to be back..." Said I
We head for the battleship bridge, where I did sat and activated the chair... suddenly, all the remaining hidden systems just pop out... The scientists got perplex...
"And that's... is where we military... seem to bit you, your lasy scientist... now examine the rest and don't make fun of my people, ok?" Said I, leaving the bridge...

by Enish Lord 2009-05-03, 09:41

(Hay guys, when can I join)

by FlashFreak22 2009-05-03, 09:56

(STOP ASKING. IF YOU'RE IN THE DW RPG GROUP, YOU GET HIS OK AND YOU GO!)

by me naam is m 2009-05-03, 11:01

Enish Lord wrote:(Hay guys, when can I join)

(When somebody finds a way and moment to write you in. which currently is not now. I'm sorry, but you'll probably have to wait for episode 3.)

FlashFreak22 wrote:(STOP ASKING. IF YOU'RE IN THE DW RPG GROUP, YOU GET HIS OK AND YOU GO!)

(this is the Stargate RP. not controlled by DW. Besides, you accidentally hit the CAPS lock key.)

by FlashFreak22 2009-05-03, 11:03

(Really? I didn't know there was a Schism group. I'm just in the DW group.)

by Enish Lord 2009-05-03, 11:07

(OK, I will wait for 3)

by **JPB18** 2009-05-03, 14:34

FlashFreak22 wrote:(Really? I didn't know there was a Schism group. I'm just in the DW group.)

There isn't... how do you think Meganew was able of posting here?

by FlashFreak22 2009-05-03, 15:05

(I'm just confused now. Let's drop all the OT crap and keep playing.)

by Insane Crayon 2009-05-03, 17:17

Analise stood in the room, in a dress fit for a queen and her hair in a ponytail like usual. She looked at Steiner not giving eye contact or any recognition of knowing him.

by FlashFreak22 2009-05-03, 17:51

(Huh? John? I'm no where near you... But if you're having a dream about me, I'm flattered. XD)

by me naam is m 2009-05-03, 17:59

Terra Nova wrote:Analise stood in the room, in a dress fit for a queen and her hair in a ponytail like usual. She looked at John, not giving eye contact or any recognition of knowing him.

(Which John? My squad's John or another?)

He just sat on a chair with his arms crossed and waited. He always hated just sitting there and doing nothing.

by FlashFreak22 2009-05-03, 18:00

(Next time specify who it is. Call me Corporal Aborr and the other John Jon, not John.

by me naam is m 2009-05-03, 18:03

FlashFreak22 wrote:(Next time please specify who it is. Call me Corporal Aborr and the other John Jon, not John.

by FlashFreak22 2009-05-03, 18:05

Please say

me naam is m wrote:
FlashFreak22 wrote:(Next time please specify who it is. Call me Corporal Aborr and the other John Jon, not John.

, please.

by Insane Crayon 2009-05-03, 18:16

[sorry, mind in other places right now]

by me naam is m 2009-05-03, 18:25

Terra Nova wrote:[sorry, mind in other places right now]

o-0
( *checks time* )

(EDIT: oh yes, of course)

by me naam is m 2009-05-04, 08:41

Jack took a deep breath as if deciding on something and grabbed something out of his pocket, a pen.
"You know, we COULD just get out of here if we want to..."
He tossed the pen up in the air, it tumbled around and he catched it again.

by Insane Crayon 2009-05-04, 11:16

Analise looked at the Captain.
"Yes? What is it that you needed me for? If it's not really important, I'd like to get back to reading."

by me naam is m 2009-05-04, 15:10

The captain smiled. "Although you may have gotten a much better treatment when sorted out the officers from the rest, it doesn't immediately mean you're a queen. No reading for now, first you listen and talk."
He sat on a table and inspected her thourougly with his eyes.
"Important? yes, you could call it that. In fact, it's the reason why you aren't having an official trial at the HQ yet. Your dear friend Steiner said that he has nothing to do with the Wraith but you knew more. Tell us... You could start by telling us why we have never found a record of you anywhere whatsoever."

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