Star Trek: Battlefield

Here is the part of the story already made based on the "Starship Battles v2" in the rpg section. It was made by me, the earthdeath and the Galaxy-Scarface (people who until now participate in the rpg as carecters).

Star Trek: Battlefield


PROLOGUE
After Picard’s encounter with the alternate Enterprise-D, a Galaxy refitted, he said to Starfleet Command that ships like those have to be designed. After one year in consideration, Starfleet Admirals approved his suggestion.
Three years latter, the USS Freedom had born. Little time passed until the launch of another Galaxy-X class ship, the USS Independence.
But after the launch of the Independence, the same Starfleet officers that approved the program were the same officers who canceled the Galaxy-X program, due to his extreme costs.
The USS Independence was delivered to the Commander João Borrego, a 35 years old commander, but very smart, it commanded the first ship that taken down the first Jem’Hadar fighter in our galaxy.
Now, he’s going on the first non-training mission of the USS Independence, into the nebula of Medina II, in the border of the Romulan Neutral Zone. His ship was sent there to investigate the disappearing of an Excelsior class ship, the USS Lexington.
What would they find hidden in the nebula?

CHAPTER 1 – THE BEGINNING

- Sir, we have warped out in Medina II nebula! – says Mark Fields, the propulsion control officer.
- Impulse engines at one third! – says the commander João Borrego.
- Aye, sir! – says Fields.
- We are detecting a small field of debris, sir! – says Dianna Marks, the sensors officer.
- Lets check it. – says the commander.
- Aye, sir! – says the propulsion officer.
When the Independence approaches the debris field, they make a terrible discovery, is the USS Lexington.
- Sir, is the Lexington! – says the sensors officer.
- Are there any survivor? – asks the commander to lieutenant Marks.
- No sir. – says Dianna. – They are all dead.
- Shields up! – order commander Borrego to the weapons officer, sergeant Dan Bills. – Red alert!
-Aye, sir! – replies sergeant Bills.
- Sir, a ship has decloaked ahead, sir! – says lieutenant Marks.
- On screen! – says the commander Borrego.
A huge, bat shaped ship appears on the screen.
- Hail them! – order the commander.
- Aye, sir! – replies sergeant Dean Hall.
- Here is Commander João Borrego, of the USS Independence. – starts commander Borrego. – What are your intentions?
- Sir, they aren’t answering, sir! – says Dean.
- Hail them again. – says commander Borrego. – Send the same message.
- Aye, sir! – replies sergeant Hall.
Suddently, a Prometheus class ship appears near the Scimitar.
- Sir, the USS Savior has appeared at the left of the Scimitar! – says lieutenant Marks.
- Open a channel! – asks the commander.
- Aye, sir! – replies Dianna.
- Here is Commander João Borrego, of the USS Independence. – says the Commander of the Independence. - Why did Starfleet Command Sent you?
- Here is Captain Earthdeath, of the USS Saviour. – says captain Earthdeath. – Starfleet Command sent us here because they thought that you might need help. I will communicate our status to Starfleet.
- Ok, do it Captain. – says João Borrego. – Independence out!
And he closed the communication channel.
- Did they already replied our hails? – asks commander Borrego.
- No sir! – says sergeant Dean.
- Hail the Saviour again. – Asks the commander.
- Aye sir. – reply Dean.
- Sir, don’t you think that the vessel represents some danger, sir? - Says Diego Slavador.
- Yes, I’m going to warn the Saviour about this, - Says Borrego.
Captain Earthdeath appears on the screen.
- Captain Earthdeath. – starts the commander of the Independence. – Here is Commander Borrego. I need to warn you about one thing.
- What it is? – says Captain Earthdeath.
- The ship isn’t responding to our hails. – Says Commander Borrego. – I recommend you to put your ship into red alert.
- I will do it. – replies Captain Earthdeath. – USS Saviour out.
The communication link is shut down.
- Any news about our new friend? – Asks Commander João Borrego.
- No, sir. – Replies sergeant Hall.
- Sir, the ship has just disappeared! – says lieutenant Dianna Marks.
- Hail the Saviour, and say them that the scimitar cloaked! – order commander Borrego.
- Aye, sir! – says Hall.
Suddenly, the USS Saviour starts firing his phasers in all directions, hitting the scimitar twice, and making him decloak at the left of the Independence.
- Sir, I recommend that we attack! – says 1st Officer Slavador.
- I agreed! – says Commander Borrego. – Lieutenant Marks, full impulse! Sergeant Bills, fire phasers at that ship!
- Aye, sir! – replies both bridge officers.
As the ship speeds up, several phaser beams are fired and hit the Scimitar, making the ship looses her shields.
- Sir, the ship has lost her shields. – Says lieutenant Marks.
- So early? – asks the commander itself – The scimitar found by Picard only loosed shields after the his ship crashed against the other. Lock a tractor beam!
- Aye, sir! – Replies Sergeant Bills.
A green group of beams hit the Scimitar, making impossible for her to move.
- Sir, the Saviour is hailing us! – says Dianna.
- On screen! – orders Commander Borrego.
- Commander, the Starfleet Command already sent us the reply. – starts Captain Earthdeath – They say that you must capture the vessel and take him top the nearest starbase.
- Ok, thanks for the information. – says Commander Borrego.
- They also think that we’re no longer needed here. – says Captain Earthdeath. – So, goodbye. Captain Earthdeath out!
The communication ended and the Saviour jumped to warp.
- Lieutenant Dianna, send a thanks message to the Saviour. – says Commander Borrego.
- Aye, sir! – replies Dianna Marks.
- Lieutenant Fields, warp to the nearest starbase! – orders Borrego.
- Aye sir! – says Lieutenant Mark Fields.
And the Independence jumped to warp, carrying they prisoner through the stars.

cool.so are you going to add more?

Earthdeath wrote:cool.so are you going to add more?

Yes, I'm only waiting for the end of part two of the rpg to make an chapter based on that battle.

ok.i just posted in it anyways.

Good, the objective is just wipe out the Galaxy-Scarface of that part, and then bost ships will warp to a near starbase needing assistence in the fight (I will explain batter when I write chapter 2).

I have another idea for a Trek starship battle, one where the Fed is in civil war and you can play as any trek race(hull points and that crap the same as JP's)

Galaxy-Scarface wrote:I have another idea for a Trek starship battle, one where the Fed is in civil war and you can play as any trek race(hull points and that crap the same as JP's)

Please, put this in the rpg section, not in literature section. So, if you want to comment the story, please, give your opinion, if not, don't post.

But it is a good Idea

JPB18 wrote:

Galaxy-Scarface wrote:I have another idea for a Trek starship battle, one where the Fed is in civil war and you can play as any trek race(hull points and that crap the same as JP's)

Please, put this in the rpg section, not in literature section. So, if you want to comment the story, please, give your opinion, if not, don't post.

But it is a good Idea

It will be v3 then.

JPB18, are you going to finish this?

ok, i usually don't care about necros, but this one is totally unacceptable. you could pm him asking him that. and btw, i dont think he will. or maybe he just forgot about it...