My 3700AD game auditioned story

THIS IS MY STORY I CREATED FOR THE NEW GAME 3700AD, so i dont know if they liked it, but hope you enjoyed it!
also this is also a summary [ONLY] of the real story, so dont go wacko about it and spamming my topic with non-sense,
hope you enjoy it!

Long ago in the year 1957AD,the great war started,the great war was started due to civll war and sudden evil consumed the leaders of the empires and goverments, your first ansetors were born on 1604AD.
they were part of the terran union society[TUS] TUS was a rich and large union that showed amazing development no other could achive, TUS was not included in the war till 1965,when there entire union fell to the hands of the Gustav Empire, one of the most fierce empires of the time,in 1 week they took over TUS,they enslaved everyone in TUS and your ancestors, your ancestors were treated very badly, forced to give birth and to leave their childeren,they enslaved, expiremented,and even killed your ancestros and every other slave...then you were born on 3675AD, your father is all you have left, Gustav empire still holds you as slaves...then something happens that will alter your life forever..........

on 3695AD,millions of the slaves were sent to exile for no reason,including your father,you were forced to see his death,his and others deaths punishment is Evil, it was to much to what they deserve....
you were forced to flee to the forests of Detia...crying and in revenging mood you were,then you saw hundreds of other people,you new that they suffered desame fate as you did, you decided its time to take Revenge,you asembled them,and created the organization that would throw the Gustav Empire into many years of war,the organization you created rebeled against the Gustav Empire from within and did aggresive damage,but in the 3699AD your organization collapsed, and its all to blame not the Gustave Empire but a member in the organization which had the power to influence the other members and to start rebeling on there other members, his name was Vanre Oscavar...you new he was a betrayer after that., now your forced to fight alone,and you seek plans to reorganize your organization and to kill the gustav empire and Vanre Oscavar to avenge your father and all the other people involved.



hoped you enjoyed it!
Please tell me how good it was!

wrong topic.this should be in public literature.
EDIT: moved.

i like this but i'd just like to point out that after about 2000 years of slavery people aren't going to have much hope and it's kinda weird how one empire can just rule with the same morals for 2000 years, yes i'm aware of the Egyptians but dynasties don't last for that much time so things could change. but this fic so you can do whateva you want. on the whole however i do like it.

Thanks though...
The Gustave Empire was in 2000 years brought down a bit by residing Empires and Governments and some that are allies with the TUS...
Im thinking of making the TUS more of something then of a government but something higher...
anyways i will update the story from now on...