lonely angel

ok. well me and a friend of mine are planing on writeing a book of some kind. it would be based on a dream my firend had the title as I think it should be "the loanly angel" is only for the sake of this topic at the moment.
I will outline the basic plot and I want to know if you guys think it is a good idea ( me and my friend have copyright of this material)

well it starts in a underground facility and there are two people infecting everyone else with a illness. ( the charictors are all based on people me and my friend know.) there are 4000 people sick one of the main charictors ( James ) kill's these two people after they infect the girl he is kinda in love with after she get's in the way of a injection ment for her brothers. the James charictor then goes about finding the cure. ( the other main carictor sarah is kinda a nurse) during this time 3 out of the 625 people sarah is takeing care of die. this only angers james and makes him work harder. he works him self to exastion for the girl he loves and only rests when she tells him to. in the end he finds the cure just before she dies and finaly sleeps after saveing her.


well do you guys think this could make a good book? its only a basic plot atm

Why not? It's always something... If possible post parts of it here! If not all!

yea well me and her have to start writeing it first. she is really tired and we prob wont get it done till after ec

Loanly? Does he give out loans? LONELY!

not funny it was taken from a line that was in the dream. a young dieing girl said to sarah about me. "he is like a lonely angel isnt he"

yes I know I mess up spelling.

Sorry. I'm just a perfectionist and somehow a procrastinator as well. I like playing video games and reading books. My life is one big hypocritical piece of crap, and I hate people for being hypocritical...

Go for it man!, just use spell check...

lol. I am writing it with Sarah its gonna be perfect spelling and grammar. well after she has checked my writing. lol

so you guys think this would make a good book?

I've got to admit, it's original... but it's not something i'd read.

an original story just that would sell rather well.

i agree it's rather original, anyways if you wanto go for it. It's always good to see something new and orignal on the shelves

I will pass all this feed back on the idea on to sarah if she thinks this is enough reason to go and do it.

of corse she will employ my ideas and skills into her writeing. so it could be really good.

That would definitely make a great story!

yay! me and her will work on it when she gets time. and when she has recovered from camp.

Because he wants to.

Alkanosis wrote:Originals never sell well these days. You see it in movies and music today; everything follows a corporate formula. Why should a book be any different?

meh I dont care if it wont be a best seller we probibly wont even manage to get it published. but hey its worth a try.

I got some of the charictors names now. ( dont jump down my throat for the names)

James - head of the team finding the cure and secondary main charictor
Sarah - nurse and main charictor
Anna - semi nurse
Bethany - sick person, also the girl that James is in love with ( not any reference to me or anything like that!)
Anthony, Ted and ( cant remember the name now) - Bethanys brothers who were also sick


thats all the really significant charictors I have atm

nice work, keeep going

sigh...this is so INCREDIBLY transparent... your real name is james, and her real name is bethany. Now, everyone who has more than -120 IQ and has been around the last 2/3 months will understand what it's about.

i only just got back so i dont know...

The names of the people are all the people you know. But if you want to, do it.

maybe i need better glasses if i couldnt see that...

the names are like that because sarah made them like that I didnt write the basic plot and the charictors. they are actulay based on the real charictors but slightly different.

I am gonna work on the descriptions when sarah gives me the basic idea of the place and ill then work on doing a description that makes the place in the readers head. ( aparently I am talented in that area)

( just saying when I post in this later its not a necro I am just giving sarah some space so I cant write anything at the moment.